You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing
this
to request a refund on my latest purchase.
I've
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purchased a black
color
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colour
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evening dress from your store
on
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apply
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last
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the last
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friday
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Friday
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(22.01.2022). It was priced at 5600 LKR.Unfortunately, there is an issue with the lining.It's rolled up after wearing.
Further
,
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the hem
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hem
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he
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was not stitched and the edges were fraying
due to
that. I did fit on
this
before purchasing. But
this
issue
was not appeared
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at that time.
This
was purchased to wear on coming Saturday, As my sister is getting married. But
due to
the fit-on errors, I will not be able to use it.
Therefore
, I kindly request a refund as soon as possible. In order to buy another party wear for the event. Hope you will understand my concern,
further
appreciate your prompt feedback. Kind regards, Dinithi Sriya
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