You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing
this
to request a refund on my latest purchase. I've
purchased a black Unnecessary verb
I
color
evening dress from your store Change the spelling
colour
on
Change preposition
apply
last
Change the article
the last
friday
(22.01.2022). It was priced at 5600 LKR.Unfortunately, there is an issue with the lining.It's rolled up after wearing. Change the capitalization
Friday
Further
, Add an article
the hem
hem
was not stitched and the edges were fraying Correct your spelling
he
due to
that. I did fit on this
before purchasing. But this
issue was not appeared
at that time.
Change to the active voice
did not appear
has not appeared
This
was purchased to wear on coming Saturday, As my sister is getting married. But due to
the fit-on errors, I will not be able to use it. Therefore
, I kindly request a refund as soon as possible. In order to buy another party wear for the event.
Hope you will understand my concern, further
appreciate your prompt feedback.
Kind regards,
Dinithi SriyaSubmitted by murph on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite