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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their homes rather than home made food now.Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.

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People
 have different feeding habits thanks to the multiple choices that we have available
nowdays
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, because
restoraunts
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restaurants
, pubs and fast
food
 can offer wide options to eat including different diets
such
 as vegan,
vegeterian
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vegetarian
,
gluten free
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 or different international dishes. Some of them like to cook their meals,
while
the
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others like to eat ready meals outside better. Eating outside can have some advantages, especially for
people
 that do not have much time for
food
 preparation, do not like to cook or want to try some traditional
food
 from abroad, but despite
that
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 I think that
this
have
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 much more disadvantages. Many
restoraunts
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restaurants
 do
no
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not
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 really take care
about
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quality
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the quality
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 of
ingredients
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the ingredients
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 that they use, so
person
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the person
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 that
eats
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eat
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 there
have
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has
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 absolutely no control or knowledge about
quality
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the quality
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 of
food
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the food
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 that he eats.
This
 fact is
particulary
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particularly
 important when it comes to
the
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people
 that are suffering
of
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some
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allergies or have some special dietary requirements. Cooking staff, very often, is not aware of
importance
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the importance
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 of hygienic measures or
crosscontamination
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cross-contamination
cross contamination
 between different types of
food
.
Also
,
food
 that
people
 eat outside, especially in fast
food
restoraunts
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restaurants
, is usually highly caloric and prepared with much more fat and oil than homemade
food
, which is very important to mention considering
global
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 problem
with
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 obesity that
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the worlds
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worlds
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 population has.
Beside
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 all of
this
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 facts, one of
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 of
this
 type of feeding is
also
 cost, because meal outside costs three to four times more than
meal
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a meal
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 prepared at home
in
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 average. In conclusion, eating outside has more disadvantages than
advatnages
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advantages
, because it is more expensive, usually unhealthy and poor quality.
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