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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicls will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

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All types of
vehicles
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 will be driven automatically by artificial
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, and
people
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 in these
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 will be passengers. In my point of view,
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 is the best way to solve traffic and car crash problems in society, because everything will be done automatically. First of all, society will get benefit from
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 journey, because artificial
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 will control the steering wheel and not give a chance to get in a crash, which makes artificial
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 the best option for the problems.
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,
people
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 can attend an online meeting, read a book, or take a rest
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 travelling to the office or another place.
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, it can reduce costs because automatic
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 do not need
drivers
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 which means no expense for
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 ,
people
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 don't need to pass driving lessons and get driver's licences because artificial
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 makes all the work
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 than
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.
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 condition will give a positive impact related to overheating cost of the corporations that have many
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 to mobilize their employees. Meanwhile, we still have several disadvantages
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 as the number of
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 will be disappeared and resulting in an increase in unemployment in the future. Another issue is that automated
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 would require high costs in repairs or annual maintenance which would be annoying and expensive as well.
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, the level of pollution will be much less because most of the
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 with auto controlling are electrical and
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 signs. Though there are some issues related to security, researchers are developing behaviour technology in artificial
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 to avoid car accidents, so those robotic systems can learn about human behaviour when they have to take a decision on the street. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned,
cars
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 which will be controlled by artificial
intelligence
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 are much safer and have more advantages than
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 that are driven by humans.
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, many companies and researchers have produced driverless
cars
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 to serve the demand of residents in recent years.

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