A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview
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Dear Mr Smith
My name is Kseniia and the reason I am writing to you is that I am looking for a job and I consider myself to be a good candidate for you.
To begin
with, currently, I am working as a waitress in the Michelin restaurant called "Panorama". I have been working here for a year and a half but now it is time to leave. I want to develop my skills and also
get promotions, therefore
, I consider your variant as the best.
Secondly
, I am highly skilled in this
area, I finished the Oxnard course for young waitresses, and, since then
, I always improved my skills by attending every course or meeting to learn something new. In addition
, I am determined, dedicated to the work and well-mannered. Importantly, I talked with you before and you said that waitresses must be over 24. The only problem is that I am only 23 and my birthday is in 2 days. I hope we can resolve this
.
To sum up
, I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I will show you all my best traits. Thank you in advance
I look forward to your reply
KseniiaSubmitted by ksrnnn on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Great job on structuring your letter logically with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. This helps in presenting your information in a coherent manner.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider including a few more transitional phrases between paragraphs to enhance the flow of your letter.
Task Achievement
You've done well in addressing all parts of the prompt thoroughly. Your explanation of your current position, suitability for the role, and availability for an interview are clear and relevant.
Task Achievement
To further improve, you could expand on how your specific skills and experiences make you uniquely qualified for the role beyond the courses attended.
Task Achievement
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal, suiting the context of a job application letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your paragraphs are well-organized, each focusing on a specific aspect of the prompt, which makes your letter easy to follow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,