The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrated the
sales
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of pop music in Asia over twenty
years
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from 2000 to 2020. The X-axis represents the
years
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and the Y-axis shows the number of
sales
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measured in thousand units. Looking from an
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perspective, it is apparent that the least popular pop music was in the year 2000 and the top-most was in 2020. First of all, it can be noticed that the
sales
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of music in the year were almost 10 thousand which was the lowest among all the
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thereafter
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there was a steady rise fromm2000 to around 2008 with the value near to 48000 units.
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, the trend started varying from upward to downward till the year 2012 approximately which is almost similar to the
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in 2000. After that, there were some fluctuations between 2012 to 2020
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however
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, there was considerable growth in the income over the following
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. The graph reflected an incline in
sales
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before reaching a peak with the figure of almost 110K units in 2020.
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