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Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #university #students #classes
Happy new
year
 everyone! As usual, for every new
year
, I need to
plan
 out the goal and the
plan
 for my new
year
, you know, to have something like a guide to a destination that I have to come to throughout the
year
. I think having something to look back on when feeling discouraged is good, especially when you’ve said it to somebody else
instead
 of keeping it to yourself. So I think the most important thing that I need to complete
this
year
 is to speak Chinese. I want to stay motivated, I mean, I still feel discouraged and lazy sometimes when learning Chinese. I permit myself to feel down but I don’t want to stay in the “lazy” mode for too long. So I hope and promise that 2023 will be a successful
year
 for me with grit and motivation as my best friend not only in learning Chinese but
also
 in everything that I do.
Secondly
, I want to take the IELTS exam again to get a higher score when I can. The
last
 time I got band 7 which is a high score for my age but I still feel like I didn’t do my best. So I what to keep practising to improve my English.
Also
, in my opinion, nothing is the limit. You think you did your best, but there is always the “better”. My
last
plan
 for
this
year
 is to be a content creator. I’ve had
this
plan
 for so long but I just don’t feel like it. I think writing content is normal, but making it brief and natural is even harder.
This
 is my
plan
 for the
year
 2023. I wish everybody watching a happy, successful, and amazing 2023. MAKE 2023 YOUR
YEAR
, EVERYONE!
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