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Most People today prefer to socialize online rather that spending time with their friends in the local community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is irritable fact that these days more and more
people
 are preferring to communicate with others on social
media
 rather than sparing
time
 with their friends in the local community.I personally believe that communication with
people
 on social
media
 has some drawbacks.These
statement
 reasons are twofold. First of all,it is indisputable fact that the internet has revolutionized.
This
 is the reason,these days we have a lot of good opportunities for communicating with everyone.Because we can communicate with our friends or relatives every day.
For instance
,if you go abroad for
living
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 or study,
after
this
 phenomenon,you will miss your family or friends.
Then
,you can avoid it.Because you have a choice and you can spend
time
 with them online and speak on social
media
.With
this
statement
,you can take more useful things.
On the other hand
,
this
statement
 has some downsides.
Firstly
,
one
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teenager
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teenagers
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 always
spend
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his
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or
her
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their
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time
 on the internet.
This
 thing can negatively impact
on
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their future life.Because he or she always prefers to communicate with loved ones
by
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through
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 it.
After
this
 situation,teenagers lose their feelings for
people
.If your mood is too bad,
then
 you can improve it by chatting with others.Because face-to-face communication with others
give
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gives
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 you kindness and there is not
this
 kind of feeling on social
media
,so the
statement
 can impact negatively
on
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 the near future. By way of conclusion,I once again reaffirm my position that most
people
 are preferring to socialize online rather
wasting
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than wasting
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time
 with their relatives in the social community these days.
This
 condition is
unsuit
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unsuited
 for the modern life of
people
.
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