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Wealthy nations should assest poorer countried with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

#nations #assest #relief #disasters
In
this
 today's world, many
people
 are suffering from various diseases , especially in developing
countries
. Some
people
 concur that rich
countries
 should aid the poor nations by providing all necessary
resources
 in terms of
food
, medicine and many more. I tend to stand with the statement does hold a valid ground and I will expand on more details in the upcoming paragraphs. First of all, In small
countries
, many
people
's livelihoods depend on agricultural land in terms of
food
 and vegetables.
Due to
 lack of rainfall, the land becomes drought.
As a result
, most
people
 consume
food
 once a day.
For instance
, the death rate of African
people
 is inclined by 8%
due to
 a lack of
food
 and water
resources
.
Furthermore
, the education and health sectors are paramount to improving the quality of life.
However
, there are no good
resources
 in those fields and many
people
 are not getting proper treatment from doctors.
Therefore
, Rich
countries
 like America, and China should take proper action by providing all the necessary things
such
 as medicine, and modern equipment for treatment.
Furthermore
, in case the rich
countries
 failed to take appropriate actions, the entire world faces the consequence near future.
For instance
, in the past times, many
people
 are affected by the infection of birds flu virus in Iran nation.
However
, the developed
countries
 didn't take it seriously which led to the virus spreading globally and the loss of millions of
people
.
Hence
, it's apparent why many
people
 are in favour of
this
 trend. In recapitulation, I reiterate that rich
countries
 should conduct campaigns in the poor nations and train practical
resources
.
In addition
, rich
countries
 should import the trade at cheaper prices.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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