Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

Citizens in the capital city might face the problems of traffic congestion every day, it is caused by the increasing number of automobiles on the road and could lead to an increasing amount of people who have commuting
stress
.
This
condition could be tackled with change their private vehicle to public
transportation
. Commuting
stress
would harm individuals not limited mental health and
also
physical health, affecting their human relationship well-being.
This
happens because individuals must spend on the road more than a quarter of their time on which is a lack of hours for their family and personal development.
Additionally
,
while
using their cars they must focus on the drive the steer, and cannot do anything when driving.
For instance
, Jakarta citizens almost spend more than 2 hours commuting to the office and
also
2 hours for return to their houses which is they do not have much time for creating interaction with their relatives, and it would affect their
stress
level
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increase and headache would occur. To handle those problems,
instead
of using a private vehicle, citizens would switch their
behavior
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from using a private car to another mode which is public
transportation
. When using public
transportation
such
as trains or buses that could lower their effort in driving, and that time might use for communicating with their relatives and reading a book to expand their knowledge.
For example
, a commuter in Jakarta when they use public
transportation
, might use their smartphones to engage with their parent and if they boring with
this
activity
then
they could read a personal development book,
furthermore
, the research showed
this
commuter more have a good quality of relationship with their family and do not feel exhausted than using a private car.
To conclude
,
individual's
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traffic jams problems
such
as
stress
and
physical
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problem could be solved if the public switched to public
transportation
which is more versatile to improve their quality of life. Eventually, if possible individuals could support the government to campaign for the benefits of using public
transportation
.
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