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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
Businesses are earning money but they
also
 should follow social
resposiblities
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responsibilities
. I completely agree that business people should have responsibilities towards
society
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 well-being. Nowadays, most
of
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apply
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the
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textile
companies
 are making a lot of money. The bi-products generated by these
companies
 are very harmful
for
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 humans so it is the duty of owners to reduce
such
waste
 and find a better solution for decomposing
waste
.
For instance
, one
company
 situated in Bangalore produced a lot of textile
waste
 which was dumped directly
in
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river
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. The Government took quick
actions
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action
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 and fined the
company
 which led to lesser
waste
 and clean river water. Protecting our environment should be the first
most
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priority for any business
companies
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company
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.
Thus
,
owner's
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owners
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 should be held responsible for
such
 things and strict actions should be taken by the government.
On the other hand
,
companies
 should not only focus on profit but
also
 on the employees they have. To deliver the deliverables on time
companies
 are making the employee work day and night.
This
 results in
bad
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 health of employees. The people should be treated nicely and
work life
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work-life
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 balance should be maintained.
For example
, organizing fun activities should be encouraged at
work place
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workplace
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. It is said that if one keeps their employee's happy
then
 the projects are delivered on time. If the business people are taking care of the folks around them
then
 that
company
 is considered
as
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friendly.
Hence
,
company
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the company
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 should be socially responsible because it is beneficial to
employee's
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employees
employee
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 and
company
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 itself. In conclusion, I adhere that businesses should follow social responsibilities to keep their employees healthy and happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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