You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in the other city. You mistakenly left a file with important documents at their house. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file, tell them why it is important. ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear MIKE I would like to thank you for the wonderful hospitality you had shown during my stay at your house

last

week. It was a memorable time which I spent

along with

your family.

Furthermore

, I like to inform you that I forget to pick up my project detail

file

from the room where I stayed the whole three days. The

file

is green In colour and contains details of my plan for software development for a retail store. The name of the

file

is software project written in black Ink on the cover . As it contains important Information about the project which I am working on . You will find the

file

on the study table of the room where I stayed. I am requesting you send the

file

by Fedex courier to my address. Which is enclosed in the letter. Hope to hear from you soon . Looking forward to hearing from you soon Regards Dennis Michel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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