In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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Advancement in technology has brought many changes in the field of
automobile
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. In the course of
time
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, all
vehicles
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will be
driverless
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and automated. In my point of view,
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has more advantages than drawbacks because passengers can reach
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destinations on
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and safely without getting
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motor vehicle accidents.
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, one of the main
advantage
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is
driverless
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automobiles will be efficient in reaching
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destination.
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, automated
vehicles
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will run
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software which can integrate navigation
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function
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and artificial intelligence together.
Due to
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the integration system, these
vehicles
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can navigate through the fastest route to reach the desired location.
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, many navigation
softwares
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software
in contemporary
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time
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have
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function
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the function
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of choosing the quickest route with less traffic, eventually saving a considerable proportion of
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spend
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on a journey.
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will increase
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productivity across all
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sectors.
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,
vehicles
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with
automatic
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driving
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function
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will be safer compared to
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self driving
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vehicles
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. To
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illustrate , human errors
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as carelessness,
over speeding
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, drunk and
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can be significantly minimized in these automobiles.
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, it is noted that Tesla which has
automated
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driving
function
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has reduced the number of accidents even when the drivers control it and has almost no accident record when it is completely automated . Artificial intelligence
softwares
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software
in these automobiles will analyze
other vehicle
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another vehicle
other vehicles
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nearby and can drive safely
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, creating
accident free
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journeys. All these can ultimately reduce the financial burden related to accidents on the economy of a country. To summarize, in near future almost all
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vehicles
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will be
driverless
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. Though there are some disadvantages,
advantages
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the advantages
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outweigh them. Passengers can commute to their intended location faster and safer with
driverless
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vehicles
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