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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

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Nowadays,
the
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recycling and
wastd
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waste
wasted
materials
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 are not dealt with properly in some countries. There are many reasons and solutions behind
this
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phenonema
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phenomena
. The main cause of
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 situation is the lack of
the
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public awareness
in
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of
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 the importance of recycling useful
materials
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. The large
quantity
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number
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 of
waste
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materials
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are
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 not
well separated
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base
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based
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 on their kinds.
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, people usually will put paper, glass and cans directly
in to
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 bins without thinking twice.
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 will result in only
few
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 of these
materials
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are
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being
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 recycled. The other reason is regulations on businesses may not
adequately
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be adequately
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 developed. Many huge businesses do not wish to handle their
waste
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materials
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. Because sometimes, the cost to set
a
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up a
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department in dealing with
there
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their
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wastes
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waste
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 is
lager
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larger
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 than not, which will make firms reluctant to put
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in efforts
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efforts
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. As for the solutions, the first one is
let
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government
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the government
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to
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apply
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improve the public awareness of the necessity to deal with re-useful
waste
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. The
government
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 can print
brouchers
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brochures
,
advertise
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and advertise
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 on
televisons
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television
televisions
 about the
important
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importance
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 to separate
waste
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.
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, the
government
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 should prepare a wider range of available bins to give
puipls
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people
 space to put their recyclable
litters
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litter
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 in. Apart from that,
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government
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the government
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 should provide some financial aid and legal punishments
toward
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to
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 the businesses. By doing so, the cooperations have more intensive to purchase more recycled
waste
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 and use
in
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it in
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 their production.
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, if they do not deal with their
waste
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 properly, they will get punished. In conclusion, there are many causes for not enough recycling of
waste
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 material, with
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government’s
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the government’s
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interven
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intervene
,
this
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 issue can be alleviated.
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