Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children nowadays use mobile

phones

and

computers

much more often than

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past.

While

I agree that

this

phenomenon will provide some benefits, I believe it will restrict young people’s

skills

development. On the one hand, smartphones and

computers

are attractive sources to improve one's reading and writing

skills

. Students are able to use these devices to gain these more efficiently.

While

they are doing school projects, they need plenty of information other than what they were taught at school.

Instead

of going to the library, they can attain knowledge by browsing a substantial amount of articles which will help to develop their reading and writing

skills

.

On the other hand

, using mobile

phones

and

computers

can bring negative effects

to

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adolescents on

the

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practice of reading and writing

skills

. The majority of young generations spend a lot of time

to watch

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fast-paced

contents

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on their

phones

and

computers

.

For example

, the most popular activity they enjoy is browsing short videos, which is a typical

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representative

of passive

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. These videos only provide some fragments of

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entire information that will only make youngsters get more

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in enhancing their reading and writing

skills

.

Moreover

, these smart devices are usually capable

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well-functioned auto-correct software.

For instance

,

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Google doc has

the

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feature

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‘spelling and grammar’, that helps users to correct their work. With

these

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type

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of help, teenagers could be more reluctant

in

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practing

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practise

in their vocabulary and grammar, which could

eventrually

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limit their ability in reading and writing. In conclusion,

while

I agree that using mobile

phones

and

computers

can improve

the

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efficiency in gaining reading and writing

skills

,

but

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I believe the time and the function they use should be controlled by their parents.