It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages
Individuals should take
risks
in their lives.Because it helps to gain self confidence
and mental health. Add a hyphen
self-confidence
However
there are several drawbacks as well. I believe taking risky Add a comma
,However
desicions
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decisions
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to have
have
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has
advantages
than disadvantages.
To begin
with, There are plenty of advantages
. Taking risks
will help to gain your confidence to another level. For instance
, I left my job in 2020 during pandemic
situation. The reason to resign is, I already had a startup. Add an article
the pandemic
a pandemic
Therefore
I wanted to develop my own business. They offered a
allowance for resigning. Change the article
an
Hence
I saw the opportunity and took the risk. Moreover
it will help you to reduce your work stress or personal life stress. Add a comma
,Moreover
For example
, one of my friends had a toxic relationship with a girl. she has always threaten
him saying, she will die if he left her. Change the verb form
threatened
Due to
this
reason
he was depressed. Add a comma
,reason
Finally
he has taken the decision to break up. Now both of them are happy as he took the correct Add a comma
,Finally
desicion
at the correct time. Correct your spelling
decision
Therefore
I think it's extremely valuable to take risks
in your day-to-day life.
On the other hand
, The main advantage is, you cannot 100% predict the future. Sometimes the decision you made will lead you to suffer for a certain time. But eventually
you will be back to normal. Add a comma
,eventually
For example
, one of my friends lost his job last
year, Therefore
he planned on migrating. He has paid 25laks for an agent. But unfortunately
he lost the money. He suffered Add a comma
,unfortunately
alot
but he didn't give up. He searched for more options. Correct your spelling
a lot
finally
he was able to migrate to Canada through the Express Entry program.
In conclusion, Add a comma
,finally
This
essay discussed the advantages
of taking risks
. it is true the advantages
outweigh it drawbacks.Submitted by murph on
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