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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, individuals prefer to have personal fitness instructors. They are not much interested in games or workout classes.There are several factors
such
 as time, and day-to-day routine to go for personal training.
This
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To begin
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individuals don't have time to play games or
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attend
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workout
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due to
 their busy schedules.
Therefore
 they want to pursue their requirements in a limited time without any errors.
Due to
 that point, they get assistance from a professional instructor. Because they can guide you and give you
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accurate advice to maintain your health. It has positive development
as well as
 a negative impact.
Firstly
, when discussing the positive side, having a trainer will directly help to maintain your health.
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 it will open opportunities for new jobs and it makes a market.
On the other hand
,there are negative developments too.
This
 will not help to build relationships with new people.
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 it will not help to concentrate or team spirit as it's not a game. In conclusion,
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 believe that
this
 is a positive development because it helps individuals to improve more about their health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fitness
  • Health
  • Personalized
  • Effective
  • Workout routines
  • Motivation
  • Guidance
  • Busy schedules
  • Limited time
  • One-on-one training
  • Qualified
  • Experienced
  • Overall well-being
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