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Advantages and disadvantages of owning a car discuss both views and give your opinion

#car
In modern times many
people
 have an owning
car
 rather than public
transport
.There had to go to of advantages and disadvantages. One of the main advantages of owning a
car
 .
This
 is because it can help to be confident .
Furthermore
, owning a
car
 needs to be reliable and efficient . It can tend to travel alone .
People
 feel like sardines in a can, Owning
cars
 is much more comfortable .
In addition
,using a private
car
 plays a crucial role on daily basis . The drivers spend more and more money on private
cars
.When
people
 driving
car
 increasing day by day .
Moreover
 owning a private
car
 can go wherever they want without having to rely on public
transport
.
However
, it can be
also
 a traffic jam.
Besides
 paying huge taxes and drivers have to renew their
car
 insurance and licence.
This
 helps to raise money for better public
transport
.
In addition
 to that
people
 could reduce private
cars
 .
This
 is because
this
 causes traffic jams during rush hour . What's more ,repairing a
car
 can be costly . Buses can be given special lanes to avoid traffic jams rather than private
cars
. Some
people
 do not afford to purchase new
cars
 .
This
 is because
people
 should be attention away from the road .
Therefore
 ,
car
 owners need to worry about the safety and parking places of their
cars
 . Public
transport
 needs to be more reliable and efficient than private
cars
. Parking a
car
 can be extremely difficult in big cities. All things considered, it seems to me that owning
cars
 to going everywhere .
Moreover
,
people
 could be given flexible timetables .
People
 can make a living by working as a driver. The drivers can take a long trip and take control of who gets in and out of the private
car
.
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