You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .......................,
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to tell you that I have seen an advertisement about the training course which I want to pursue and that will be beneficial for my career and the company's growth.
This
course is based on developing software and in this
programme, they will teach how AI and other latest software can help to develop applications and websites in an easy way and in minimum time. Because this
training is in class, I need some leave, so I can study better and finish this
course. Moreover
, as our company help employees with fees for learning, I also
want to apply for reimbursement for this
certification. After completion of this
curriculum, I will have the knowledge of the latest technology which will help me and the company both to compete in the market.
Please tell me your decision as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
AnkitSubmitted by ap064911 on
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure is generally clear, but adding a little more detail about the specific benefits of the course for the company would enhance the coherence. Try to explain precisely how the training will contribute to the company's objectives.
coherence cohesion
Remember to include more explicit transitions between paragraphs to make the letter even smoother. Phrases such as 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' and 'In conclusion' can help guide the reader.
task achievement
While the letter is mostly focused on explaining the benefits of the course and the request for support, slightly expand on how precisely this knowledge will be applied in your daily work for better task achievement.
task achievement
Your writing tone is polite and professional, which is suitable for a formal letter to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The letter covers all required aspects—describing the course, explaining the company's assistance, and stating the course's usefulness.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and formal, adhering to the requirements of a professional letter.