Some teachers think international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students do you think it's advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days many teachers argue that all secondary school pupils should take part in international exchange programs because of
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who exchange in America, but
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fluent in English.
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with their teachers and peers.
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. Teenagers have more opportunities to learn
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, studying abroad
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thinking skills will develop.
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to learn
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cultures and to learn other languages. Now he independent thinking than
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peers and his mind browned his horizon. In conclusion,
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universal exchange for students may have some drawbacks. I would
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to participate in these programs.
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