To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

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the idea of eating edible

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a good source of protein, fatty acids and vitamins,

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if the

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is well presented like being cooked in

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of recipes, and spiced well to taste more delicious, is the great way to introduce them to the society.

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being crushed and cooked, that we can still retain its vitamins and minerals, is more acceptable than eating the

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we have to be

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on the kinds of

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that we will ingest. There are lots of

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poisonous and not suitable for

comsumption

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consumption

, we always have to make sure

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we are eating the right

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or government projects to deal with

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should be eaten or not,

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poisoning

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in the future.

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based

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idea, since it gives us vitamins and minerals for

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healthy body,

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we should always check and see if they are good for human consumption so we will not risk our health.