The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the average
number
of foreign students
, which study abroad in the USA
, UK
, Australia
and Canada
, while
the table illustrates their percentage
in two different years
.
Overall
, the first three countries
, the USA
, the UK
and Australia
have a higher increment in their number
of foreign students
than Canada
. In comparison, the number
of foreign students
in 2012 is significantly higher than in 2004. Moreover
, the percentage
of people who studied abroad in the last
three countries
has increased noticeably, while
in the USA
, it remained constant.
Looking initially
at the bar chart, the highest number
of foreign students
is in the USA
, which grew approximately 70000 from 170000 in 2004 to 240000 in 2012. In the next two countries
, people who studied abroad in UK
and Australia
were around 120000 in 2004 and rose to approximately under 20000 in 2012. Ultimately, Canada
is ranked as the lowest country with foreign students
, and the number
didn’t change significantly in 8 years
, from 35000 in 2004 to over 55000 in 2012.
Regarding the remaining table, in Australia
the percentage
of overseas students
has increased substantially with 5% in eight years
, from 19% in 2004 to 24% in 2012, therefore
it remained the highest country of overseas students
compared to USA
, UK
and Canada
. The figures for the UK
and Canada
went up slightly from 9% and 5% in 2004 to 13% and 7% in 2012 respectively. Whereas
the situation in the USA
remained unchanged over time with 2% in both years
, therefore
it has the lowest percentage
compared to all English-speaking countries
.Submitted by cristi.corceac on
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