The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the average
number
of foreign
students
, which study abroad in the
USA
,
UK
,
Australia
and
Canada
,
while
the table illustrates their
percentage
in two different
years
.
Overall
, the first three
countries
, the
USA
, the
UK
and
Australia
have a higher increment in their
number
of foreign
students
than
Canada
. In comparison, the
number
of foreign
students
in 2012 is significantly higher than in 2004.
Moreover
, the
percentage
of people who studied abroad in the
last
three
countries
has increased noticeably,
while
in the
USA
, it remained constant. Looking
initially
at the bar chart, the highest
number
of foreign
students
is in the
USA
, which grew approximately 70000 from 170000 in 2004 to 240000 in 2012. In the next two
countries
, people who studied abroad in
UK
and
Australia
were around 120000 in 2004 and rose to approximately under 20000 in 2012. Ultimately,
Canada
is ranked as the lowest country with foreign
students
, and the
number
didn’t change significantly in 8
years
, from 35000 in 2004 to over 55000 in 2012. Regarding the remaining table, in
Australia
the
percentage
of overseas
students
has increased substantially with 5% in eight
years
, from 19% in 2004 to 24% in 2012,
therefore
it remained the highest country of overseas
students
compared to
USA
,
UK
and
Canada
. The figures for the
UK
and
Canada
went up slightly from 9% and 5% in 2004 to 13% and 7% in 2012 respectively.
Whereas
the situation in the
USA
remained unchanged over time with 2% in both
years
,
therefore
it has the lowest
percentage
compared to all English-speaking
countries
.
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