The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the average
number
of foreign Use synonyms
students
, which study abroad in the Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
UK
, Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
Canada
, Use synonyms
while
the table illustrates their Linking Words
percentage
in two different Use synonyms
years
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the first three Linking Words
countries
, the Use synonyms
USA
, the Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Australia
have a higher increment in their Use synonyms
number
of foreign Use synonyms
students
than Use synonyms
Canada
. In comparison, the Use synonyms
number
of foreign Use synonyms
students
in 2012 is significantly higher than in 2004. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
percentage
of people who studied abroad in the Use synonyms
last
three Linking Words
countries
has increased noticeably, Use synonyms
while
in the Linking Words
USA
, it remained constant.
Looking Use synonyms
initially
at the bar chart, the highest Linking Words
number
of foreign Use synonyms
students
is in the Use synonyms
USA
, which grew approximately 70000 from 170000 in 2004 to 240000 in 2012. In the next two Use synonyms
countries
, people who studied abroad in Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Australia
were around 120000 in 2004 and rose to approximately under 20000 in 2012. Ultimately, Use synonyms
Canada
is ranked as the lowest country with foreign Use synonyms
students
, and the Use synonyms
number
didn’t change significantly in 8 Use synonyms
years
, from 35000 in 2004 to over 55000 in 2012.
Regarding the remaining table, in Use synonyms
Australia
the Use synonyms
percentage
of overseas Use synonyms
students
has increased substantially with 5% in eight Use synonyms
years
, from 19% in 2004 to 24% in 2012, Use synonyms
therefore
it remained the highest country of overseas Linking Words
students
compared to Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Canada
. The figures for the Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Canada
went up slightly from 9% and 5% in 2004 to 13% and 7% in 2012 respectively. Use synonyms
Whereas
the situation in the Linking Words
USA
remained unchanged over time with 2% in both Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
therefore
it has the lowest Linking Words
percentage
compared to all English-speaking Use synonyms
countries
.Use synonyms
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