Some people think it is more important for the government to spend more money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illnesses than the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Instead

of allocating more money

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the

treatment

of

patients

, some people suppose that

government

should attach great importance to the promotion of a healthy lifestyle for inhabitants, which can radically prevent illnesses. In my opinion, both of them are significant so

government

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needs to invest funds correctly

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these two aspects.

Government

should be responsible to promote a healthy lifestyle for citizens by some possible measures. First of all, the

government

could provide some dietary recommendations and guidelines including healthy dietary management, nutrition elementary knowledge and cooking guidance for dwellers. These suggestions can improve citizens’ awareness of a healthy

life style

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lifestyle

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,

thus

to some extent avoiding some unhealthy living habits. Once a healthy

life style

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lifestyle

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has been established, it can benefit people’s physical well-being and prevent some chronic diseases

such

as heart attack and high blood pressure.

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results in

the

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lower rate of contracting diseases, so hospitals would no longer face the stress of overwhelming

patients

.

However

,

treatment

for

patients

also

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indispensable. If

patients

are not able to receive immediate and effective

treatment

because of

the

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poor medical services,

mortality

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the mortality

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rate would increase, which poses threat to the development of a country.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should allocate funds to improve

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the health

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health care

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healthcare

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system.

For example

, the research and development of drugs which aim to treat serious illnesses should be supported by the

government

. In conclusion, advocacy of healthy life and

treatment

for people who have been ill are both vital, which requires the

government

to achieve an equilibrium of funds to allocate these two public duties.