In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In some

countries

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the average weight of

people

is increasing and their levels of

heath

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health

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and fitness are decreasing. I think that the cause of these problems

are

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due to

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unhealthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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and the lack of

exercise

. Nowadays,

people

are getting

more and more lazy

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lazier and lazier

lazier

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. They want

convience

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convenience

in everything when they come home from work, they will have microwaved dinner or fast

food

so that they do not have to take the trouble to prepare a med or wash up after dinner. The introduction of fast

food

is

also

the main cause of unhealthy. living.

People

are opting

a

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fast

food

restaurant med rather than

a

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apply

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simple homecooked med. Yes, your burgers and pizzas tasted better than a homecooked med but think of all the calories you are swallowing. The oil they used to fry your fries. It is literally black. Eating too much fast

food

will

diso

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do

lead to health problems. Sugary drinks,

pacheted

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packeted

chips, candies and chocolate are

also

some of the causes that

contributes

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to unhealthy lifestyle Heavy consumption can lead to weight gain and

diabeties

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diabetes

. I think that the main cause is the lack of

exercise

. As you grow older, your metabolism rate drops. Even if you are eating the same amount as before, you will still gain weight. The one and only solution to

this

is

exercise

. The recommended

exercise

• per day is at least 30 minutes of brisk walking.

This

target can be easily achieved if

people

do not drive to work. They can take a bus or a train and drip one stop earlier than walk to the office. Every little bit counts. When you

comes

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home from work, you can play with your kids or bring the dog for a walk Anything to get your attention away from the couch. More

exercise

will

surpress

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suppress

your cravings for sugary

stuffs

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.

People

should

also

balance their diet.

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, by eating more vegetables and fruits. Eat less meat and drink plenty of water throughout the day organise time with your family to take a walk outdoors to enjoy the

sceneries

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rather than cooping yourself in the house.

This

is healthy living for the body, heart and the -soul. It is

also

less likely to fall sick if you do plenty of

exercise

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exercises

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as your body is strong enough to fight off illness and diseases.