You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him / her say what you will do

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Dear Zaki I hope you returned

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safe and well. I'm writing to apologise for forgetting to return your textbook on time before you went

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, I was really busy preparing for my presentation on biology 102 next term

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since I lost mine, your textbook has been really helpful to me to the point that I totally forgot about your flight

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. I really hope that you don't need

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particular textbook

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you're at

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, especially now that we're done with the exams

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semester

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as far as I know you don't have any presentations in

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field, but if you need it, I'

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do my best to send it back. As I said in case you want to use it, I'

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send it to you via courier or via express mail, if you need it as soon as possible, I already have the number of the DHL office in town, I'

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call them and ask them about the procedures and how much it will cost, and of course, don't worry about it I'

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gladly pay for it. Please accept my sincere apologies, and I'm waiting for your response. All the best Youcef

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Regret, Apologize, Inconvenience, Retaining, Sentimental value, Crucial, Propose, Solution, Mailing, Replace, Willingness, Costs, Acknowledging, Rectify

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