Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Jay, I'm glad that you
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me what sport I would recommend! I'm writing to recommend
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that hiking would definitely
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you the most.If I remember correctly, you just had
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surgery
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is not the one that consumes lots of energy as others do. As you might know, there are a lot of hiking clubs in
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town since we are surrounded by many mountains. These clubs provide some training
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on
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basis, from beginners to
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. We can
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learn
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together! Even though I'm
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steps advance of you,
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I believe we would enjoy
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hiking together in some middle-height mountains. If there have any emergency situations I have some medical knowledge that
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of them as well. Looking forward to hearing from you! Best wishes, Zoe
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