Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that negative circumstances should be accepted and
complain
about them have no benefits, Replace the word
complaints
while
others are convinced that everyone has the power of change and should better to
utilize it and advanced the situation.
To commence with, being grateful for what we have and our daily life is the first step to improving unwanted events. Fix the infinitive
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As a consequence
, many believe that it
good to be thankful and Add a verb
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do
not fight with destiny. In Unnecessary verb
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, these Change the wording
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group
believe in fate rather than themselves, Change the determiner
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therefore
find the acceptation as a remedy and learn through experience. For example
, a student who get
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gets
the
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a
B
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of B
in
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on
the
exam could think Correct article usage
an
in
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this
way and take it to hopefully will try more in future and get the
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A
in the next exam.
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On the other hand
, some people are not only cautious about events but also
have faith in themselves. These group
are convinced that can change the situation. Change the determiner
groups
Furthermore
, they do not believe in destiny and assume that man are
able to make difference. So they challenge everything and Change the verb form
is
struggling
to prove it. Wrong verb form
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For instance
, if they are not pleased in some way such
as job occupation or their friendship, they will try to figure out the reason and find alternatives.
I honestly think,
obstacles that we are faced occur in numerous ways and the first and foremost step is to understand Remove the comma
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that
these troubles are Correct word choice
whether
whether
in our control or not. If we Correct word choice
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able to Change the verb form
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realised
the conditions, we definitely could Change the verb
realise
to
tackle them. Change the verb form
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Example
can be seen in the people who lost their dears and Add an article
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The example
consequences
of not Correct article usage
the consequences
acceptance
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accepting
lead
them to depression.
In conclusion, it seems advisable that when we Change the verb form
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faced
with problems, we should ask ourselves if Add a missing verb
are faced
this
is under my
control or not. Correct pronoun usage
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Then
try to change what we can and let go what
is not in our power.Change preposition
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