Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common belief that negative circumstances should be accepted and
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about them have no benefits,
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utilize it and advanced the situation. To commence with, being grateful for what we have and our daily life is the first step to improving unwanted events.
As a consequence
, many believe that
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good to be thankful and
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not fight with destiny. In
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, these
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believe in fate rather than themselves,
therefore
find the acceptation as a remedy and learn through experience.
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grade
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the
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exam could think
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this
way and take it to hopefully will try more in future and get
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in the next exam.
On the other hand
, some people are not only cautious about events but
also
have faith in themselves. These
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are convinced that can change the situation.
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, they do not believe in destiny and assume that man
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able to make difference. So they challenge everything and
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to prove it.
For instance
, if they are not pleased in some way
such
as job occupation or their friendship, they will try to figure out the reason and find alternatives. I honestly think
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obstacles that we are faced occur in numerous ways and the first and foremost step is to understand
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these troubles are
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in our control or not. If we
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able to
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the conditions, we definitely could
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tackle them.
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can be seen in the people who lost their dears and
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of not
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lead
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them to depression. In conclusion, it seems advisable that when we
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with problems, we should ask ourselves if
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control or not.
Then
try to change what we can and let go
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is not in our power.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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