The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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to draw your attention to our area that the improper collection of garbage and the problems we are facing for

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, I am residing in the 2nd lane, North street, Nanded. More than 150 families are there in

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location and we all have been depending on the municipal garbage collection system.

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it worked properly before, now they are coming once a week only.

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change of routine is leading to a plethora of issues in

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region.

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, the routed smell of waste products is not bearable.

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, the increasing number of flies and mosquitos

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as diarrhoea, fever etc. I would like to suggest that to find a reasonable solution to

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issue. It could be better to provide the collection service at least thrice a week and make sure that the employees are doing their duties efficiently. I would be grateful if you could solve these issues for your community. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Asha Vijayan

ashakiranbhavsarSat Jan 28 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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174 words

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