Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that all genders should have the same proportion of attendance at higher education

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argument, I completely disagree with the given statement.

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, applying

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fundamental human rights. From the Magna Carta statement to

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modern law mechanics, education is simply defined as a basic human right without regard for gender or race.

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way of positive discrimination

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women’s rights,

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could be detrimental in

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consequences among society

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teenegers

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teenagers

who wish to apply

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universities. If

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method would be applied and some

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graduates have not been selected by university authorities,

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could cause a lack of motivation and unclear future goals

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unfair selection method.

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admission way does not really seems applicable in terms of assessment

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the workload of admission officers they might face in the process. Trying to give the same chance for both genders

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all educational levels is

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Turkey’s education system, possible problems can occur starting from the primary

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and not least to the high

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. Taking consideration of gender inequality at

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educational

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could be an unrealistic and unnatural approach

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there are major problems even at primary

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, in the eastern part of Turkey, in most of the rural areas, teenage girls are hardly attending to

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schools

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. In my opinion, if we are keen to solve gender and opportunity equality in

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scheme

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, measures can be taken all the way

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starting from the bottom of the educational pyramid. In conclusion, I completely disagree that giving the same chance to both genders in university admissions despite the main motivation of

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given statement.