Your Australian friend is thinking about making a short visit to your country, and intends to visit a particular tourist attraction during his/her stay. However, you feel that it would be better for your friend to visit a different tourist attraction. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good time for your friend to visit your country say why it would be better to visit a different tourist attraction suggest that you and your friend meet

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Dear Dave I hope

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letter finds you well. I heard you decided to visit Ukraine soon and the main aim is to see the capital city centre. Let me, as a former citizen of

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town, give you peace of advice about the attractions there. First of all, you should visit Ukraine next spring, especially Kyiv where you will see the city centre full of flowers. Definitely, would be better If you expand your trip destination. The city outskirts are amazing and full of historical places and cultural attractions

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as native markets, cooking festivals, and the famous battlefields. And you will recharge your battery in the fresh air. Visiting these places will impress you and could be useful for a better understanding of our mentality. Please, be prepared to meet the most generous people out of the megapolis. I would be happy to meet you at the airport and spend some time showing you around. Yours sincerely, Alex

sashko.holodniySun Jan 29 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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161 words

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