Computers have their advantages and disadvantages.

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plays a vital role in our life. The importance of

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desktops

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is increasing by leaps and bounds. Many individuals claim that it is beneficial

while

others reject

this

notion. In my, opinion

this

notion has some drawbacks and potential. The position of

computers

appears to be more rational. In

this

, essay we will address the positive and negative effects of

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trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant fact is that the pressure of

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is

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by

computers

. Another pivotal aspect is

time saving

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equipment.

Furthermore

, they save

wealth

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the wealth

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of big organizations because

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activities we

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by

this

.

In addition

, the population is fascinated by computer because it is

appealing

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an appealing

the appealing

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tool and compatible.

Similarly

, a survey conducted by the prestigious university of Oxford in London revealed that

computers

solved numerous

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issues

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of business in

this

modern era.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

Although

, the most alarming one is dependents avoid outdoor activities owing to computer games.

Besides

, countless viruses

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huge projects and firms faced massive losses.

On the other hand

, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that it is decreasing our

decision making

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decision-making

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skill

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skills

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.

Additionally

, youngsters are

more

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lazy rather than past

due to

computers

.

Moreover

,

computers

are expensive and challenging to use. For, example destructive countries

such

as India, Pakistan, and, Bhutan are facing

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the problem

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of how to utilise

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To sum up

,

according to

the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the perks of

computers

are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks should be not overlooked either.