In the future, nobody will buy printed newpapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is commonly believed that conventional newspapers or
books
will be obsoleted as there are vast sources of information
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be approached on the
Internet
without payment required. In
this
short essay, we will discuss whether it is true or not. In the future,
people
will have
tendency
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a tendency
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to read digitally rather than old-fashioned printed
books
. The first thing seemed to be the cause of
this
is the rapid growth of technology and the
Internet
which makes
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a wide-range
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of
books
available for free.
Although
this
method required an equipment with
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connection, it is accessible
for
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everyone without the need
of
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payment.
people
could read news articles
within
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few
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touches which
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the convenience of digital reading. Though the idea
people
no longer need to buy
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books
is true, in many
cases
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books
play a vital role which their online
counterpart
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counterparts
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can not provide. Academic and specialized
books
are the
concreate
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evidence for
this
. Those
books
are written specifically aimed at a certain group of readers
such
as college students and experts in their field of knowledge and these
books
are not likely to be widely available on the
Internet
. Another proof
for
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this
fact is
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that some
books
are not approachable through the
Internet
due to
copyright
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the copyright
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of
such
printed pages.
Modern day
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publishers, authors and even a group of readers
highly
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concern about the copyright problem,
hence
people
tend to prefer to read printed
books
rather than do it online.
To conclude
the argument, though some
books
and news magazines will
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by
online
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an online
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version
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, specialized and academic
books
will always be
the
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indispensable part to readers.
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  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • tactile experience
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