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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is inevitable that the world has changed significantly because of the emergence of technology nowadays. As we can see now, all
information
 we want to know can be accessed easily through the internet. For that reason, in the near future,
people
 are not interested in buying printed
newspapers
 or even
books
 and move to free digital ones. There has been a debate on the matter,
this
 essay will explain why I think digital
newspapers
 or
books
 for free will give some advantages.
Firstly
, digital
newspaper
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 and
books
 on the internet have a wide range of
information
 and categories. Most
people
 seek readings both for gaining knowledge and finding entertainment. When they buy printed
newspapers
 and
books
, they only get limited
information
 as it depends on what newspaper edition and book title they buy.
On the other hand
, when we are curious about something,
for example
, we want to know how to bake an almond croissant and how to cook lasagna, we just can directly go to the Google site and jot the keywords,
then
 the
information
 needed will show up in no time, even we can
also
 get other variety of menus beside that Western cuisine to broaden our cooking skills.
However
, when
read
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printed
books
 or
newspaper
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 about the recipes, we should find the title or edition first that contains our desired menus and the
information
 is just limited to what we want to find. In
this
 case, I’m pretty sure non-printed will be more beneficial and effective for not even youngsters, but all
people
 from all age ranges.
Lastly
,
besides
 the plenty of reading categories we find on the internet,
people
 unconsciously will lessen the number of paper waste on
this
 planet. When we are finished reading
newspapers
 or
books
, the printed ones usually just end up in the closet or even in the garbage bin. The more we read, the more waste we produce.
Whereas
 when we read digitally, we can just put it in our memory folder and read them whenever we want to without even having to contribute paper waste. If in the future we are accustomed to
this
 habit, we somehow can reach an environment-friendly society,
moreover
, help our mother earth to be greener.
This
 advantage is noticed by Amazon, as now, Kindle is quite popular and become an alternative for bookworms. In conclusion, reading non-printed
newspapers
 and
books
 for free offer some advantages both for us and
also
 the society.
In addition
, we must be ready for
this
 alteration of our reading habits.
However
, in the end, it is acceptable for everyone to choose their preference, whether it is printed or digital and purchased or free, as long as, they are fulfilled and satisfied with the
information
 they seek and need.
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  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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