Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that
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of different species is
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vital issue facing us today,
while
others are convinced that there have been more essential troubles
such
as pollution and global warming which are treated
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plan
in
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whole
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. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument and will
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personal
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viewpoint in conclusion. It goes without saying that extinction is
a
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one of the most important
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facing us today. The disappearance of some fauna and flora has been escalating over the years
as a result
of human activities
such
as deforestation and illegal hunting. Destruction of these creatures would break down the natural chain.
As a consequence
, man will
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live in
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in the future.
On the other hand
, there has been an unprecedented rise in global temperature over the past decades, scientists overwhelmingly believe that
this
is a huge and serious problem which may
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the ear
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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