Some people believe that old public buildings in cities should be restored while others say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. Agree or disagree?

It is often considered that old heritage sculptures in cities should be well preserved.

Whereas

, a few individuals believe that old buildings should be replaced with new buildings by demolishing the old ones.

Thus

, I partially assent from the notion which

further

leads to a logical conclusion.

Firstly

, Some of the unplanned and without basic amenities

building

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buildings

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are constructed in the main region

in

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of

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city

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the city

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.

Resulting

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, occupying more space making

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main obstacle in traffic congestion and over in

long

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time it has been made

threat

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a threat

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to human lives because of the

over life

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span turned out.

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, The famous Holkar Bridge in Mumbai collapsed in

rainy

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season

due to

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neglance

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negligence

of their maintenance and

life

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the life

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period exceeded in that event several

injured

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were injured

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and died.

Hence

it is clear that

such

type of building should be ground level before happening misfortune

event

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,

instead

of

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new planned infrastructure

avoid

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traffic

dilemma

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and utilize proper space for living needs.

Secondly

,

Pre historic

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buildings should be conserved for

the

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apply

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tourist attraction and making history of the country . they are windows to the past. When we restore a building we

area

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are

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preserving our heritage and part of

history

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the history

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of that generation.

For Instance

, In Maharashtra

number

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a number

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of forts and historical telling building are preserved for

the

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tourist attraction in a way So it

is helps

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to boost

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the country

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country

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economy

while

foreigner comes to know about that place more and more.

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,

government

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is

also

attentive take part in

create

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vigilance about culture in

younger

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a younger

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generation

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mind

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. It

is helps

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to conserve culture and history ever and forever. In a nutshell, old architectural apartments should be rebuilt with new ones to complete the demand of citizens

resolves

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and resolves

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congested living problems.

Similarly

, upcoming folks need to connect with ancient architects which helps them to connect with their ancestors and enhance their knowledge.