It is often considered that old heritage sculptures in cities should be well preserved. main obstacle in traffic congestion and over in
Whereas
, a few individuals believe that old buildings should be replaced with new buildings by demolishing the old ones. Linking Words
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further
leads to a logical conclusion.
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Firstly
, Some of the unplanned and without basic amenities Linking Words
building
are constructed in the main region Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
in
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of
city
. Add an article
the city
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, occupying more space makingReplace the word
Result
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the
long
time it has been made Change the article
a long
threat
to human lives because of the Add an article
a threat
the threat
over life
span turned out. Add a hyphen
over-life
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, The famous Holkar Bridge in Mumbai collapsed in Linking Words
rainy
season Correct article usage
the rainy
due to
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the neglance
neglance
of their maintenance and Correct your spelling
negligence
life
period exceeded in that event several Correct article usage
the life
injured
and died. Add a missing verb
were injured
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it is clear that
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such
type of building should be ground level before happening misfortune Linking Words
event
, Fix the agreement mistake
events
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crate
new planned infrastructure Wrong verb form
crating
avoid
traffic Fix the infinitive
to avoid
dilemma
and utilize proper space for living needs.
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dilemmas
Secondly
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Pre historic
buildings should be conserved for Correct your spelling
Prehistoric
the
tourist attraction and making history of the country . they are windows to the past. When we restore a building we Correct article usage
apply
area
preserving our heritage and part of Correct your spelling
are
history
of that generation. Add an article
the history
For Instance
, In Maharashtra Linking Words
number
of forts and historical telling building are preserved for Change the article
a number
the number
the
tourist attraction in a way So it Correct article usage
apply
is helps
to boost Change the verb form
helps
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the country
country
economy Change noun form
country's
while
foreigner comes to know about that place more and more. Linking Words
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government
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the government
also
attentive take part in Linking Words
create
vigilance about culture in Change the verb form
creating
younger
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a younger
generation
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generation's
mind
. It Fix the agreement mistake
minds
is helps
to conserve culture and history ever and forever.
In a nutshell, old architectural apartments should be rebuilt with new ones to complete the demand of citizens Change the verb form
helps
resolves
congested living problems. Correct word choice
and resolves
Similarly
, upcoming folks need to connect with ancient architects which helps them to connect with their ancestors and enhance their knowledge.Linking Words
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