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IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE NUMBER OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS ARE DECLINING. WHY DO YOU THINK IT IS HAPPENING? HOW TO SOLVE THE ISSUE?

#countries #animals #plants
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 us about the scientist who discovered the equation of black holes. He did it from
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Einstein’s equation which explaining us
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how
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massive bodies are bending cosmic space.
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 about how the sun is influencing
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planets in our planet system. Because the sun has bigger gravitation than planes, he is bending
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 space and they are spinning around the sun like a ball around a bigger ball on stretched canvas.
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, a black hole has
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 gravitation and in
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 fact, we have to understand that black holes are
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 infinitely curving space. Humanity has many telescopes around the world, which can show us,
besides
 stars and many other planes, black holes that are far away from us. Because of
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, we need to focus
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 entire telescope on one point and
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 man shows
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 first picture of
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 hole caught by telescopes. Only in 2019, humanity has been able to partly
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Einstein’s equation. In
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, we can see
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 horizon
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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