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Some people think it's beter to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals like to have friends who always agree with them,
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 others want friends that sometimes do not have the same
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 as them.
While
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 having a confidant that readily agrees with our
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 has its benefit, somebody who corrects us when we are wrong is the type of
friend
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 preferred by some
people
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. I believe that it is important to be friends with someone who does not follow us blindly. In
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 I am going to elaborate on the same. Having a companion that always agrees with one's viewpoint is good for
people
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 who cannot tolerate criticism. These individuals like to work on their own accord as it is hard for them to handle criticism constructively. Citing a live example, my cousin's sister becomes furious if I point out one of her mistakes, she has a close
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 who always seems to agree with her point of view.
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, these
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 like to have a
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 who agrees with their
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. Some
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 like to have companions that correct them whenever they are wrong. These individuals believe that there is a possibility that they could be wrong, so they have an open mind toward any suggestion for improvement.
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, my best
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 disagreed with my decision to work for one company my whole life, and switching jobs opened more opportunities for me.
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, some
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 want a
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 in their life who can assist to correct their decision for a better outcome.
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,
although
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 having a
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 who agrees with us is preferred by some
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, others like to have a confidant that does not always agrees with their way of thinking. I am of the
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 that having a
friend
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 means someone who can guide us when we are wrong.
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