It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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, we always have a choice

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risks

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professional

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. In my opinion, taking

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is always giving us two results that are new

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and

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to decide.

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taking

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is bring us closer to

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new lesson in life. If we never try something, we will never know the

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. Despite the decisions we took often

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to

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and undesired

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, at least we could learn a valuable point.

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may help not only

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business to prevent

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undesired

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again in the future.

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in the company

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good work to be promoted. If there is problem

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in their division, they could share a solution even though it is probably rejected.

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, they can learn from those rejections and make an improvement

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the next proposed idea.

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, taking

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may train

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to grow their mindset. Every decision has a risk;

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it is better to analyse which is a good pinpoint or a low-risk action that must be taken. Taking a fresh

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, they need to know whether they need to work or pursue higher education. Both decisions have

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but they can figure out what suit most for them

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contemplation and

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.

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method can be integrated with risk analysis tools which are suitable for business purposes

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personal intention

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as which

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decision lead to the less drawback.

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, people will become smarter in taking a decision if they think

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regarding the

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.

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,

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could lead to

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undesired

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,

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can give

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a lesson for the future. Taking

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also

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help

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helps

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someone

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to have choices

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growing their own mindset.