Plastic bags, plastic bottle and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the envirnment? What can be done by governemnts and individuals to solve this problem? Gove reasons for your answer and include nay releant examples.

These days, many
plastics
used in everyday life,
such
as
plastic
bottle
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, bags and packaging
that
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have negative effects
to
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the environment. In
this
essay, I will elaborate
these
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negative effects and how to cope with
this
problem as a
government
and an individual.
To begin
with,
plastics
are the most things that pollute the environment. As we know, wherever
people
go to
the
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some tourist destination, usually they could find
many
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plastic
garbage, from
a
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small
cup
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to big
plastic
bags easily.
This phenomena
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could be
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danger
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for animal life,
for
instance
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turtle that
missunderstood
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misunderstood
a
plastic
cup as a jellyfish and eat it. It will
makes
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the turtle suffer to death and decrease the population.
Second,
not like organic garbages,
plastics
take years to
unreveled
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unrevealed
unravelled
to become smaller particles.
That is
means that
plastic
waste filled the earth and can not
unreveled
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unrevealed
unravelled
revealed
untill
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until
100 years. We could see the
plastic
from 10 or 20 years ago and it
still
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there.
However
, there are some things that
people
could do to reduce
the
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plastic
usage in everyday
used
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. The first one, started
form
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individual
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side,
people
could bring their own metal or
wood
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cutlery to reduce
plastic
cutlery when
people
eat outside, the most used
plastics
would be straws. If
people
bring their own metal straws imagine how much they can reduce
plastics
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waste.
Next,
government
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the government
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should make a policy to decrease
plastic
usage, so that
people
forced
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are forced
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to do so.
for example
here in Indonesia,
government
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the government
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prohibited groceries store to prepare
plastic
bag
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bags
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so that
people
always bring their own bags. And it is quite successful to reduce
plastics
.
To sum up
,
reduce
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plastics
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usage should
started
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be started
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from
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small
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act
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as an individual. Meanwhile,
government
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the government
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could prevent from
policy
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the policy
a policy
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that
encourage
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encourages
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people
to care more about the environment.
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