Plastic bags, plastic bottle and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the envirnment? What can be done by governemnts and individuals to solve this problem? Gove reasons for your answer and include nay releant examples.
These days, many
plastics
used in everyday life, such
as plastic
bottle
, bags and packaging Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
that
have negative effects Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
the environment. In Change preposition
on
this
essay, I will elaborate these
negative effects and how to cope with Change preposition
on these
this
problem as a government
and an individual.
To begin
with, plastics
are the most things that pollute the environment. As we know, wherever people
go to the
some tourist destination, usually they could find Remove the article
apply
many
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much
plastic
garbage, from a
small Correct article usage
apply
cup
to big Fix the agreement mistake
cups
plastic
bags easily. This phenomena
could be Change the determiner
This phenomenon
These phenomena
Add an article
a danger
danger
for animal life, Replace the word
dangerous
for
instance
turtle that Add the comma(s)
,instance
missunderstood
a Correct your spelling
misunderstood
plastic
cup as a jellyfish and eat it. It will makes
the turtle suffer to death and decrease the population. Change the verb form
make
Second,
not like organic garbages, plastics
take years to unreveled
to become smaller particles. Correct your spelling
unrevealed
unravelled
That is
means that plastic
waste filled the earth and can not unreveled
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unrevealed
unravelled
revealed
untill
100 years. We could see the Correct your spelling
until
plastic
from 10 or 20 years ago and it still
there.
Add a missing verb
is still
However
, there are some things that people
could do to reduce the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
usage in everyday used
. The first one, started Replace the word
use
form
Correct your spelling
from
individual
side, Correct article usage
the individual
people
could bring their own metal or wood
cutlery to reduce Replace the word
wooden
plastic
cutlery when people
eat outside, the most used plastics
would be straws. If people
bring their own metal straws imagine how much they can reduce plastics
waste. Change the noun form
plastic
Next,
government
should make a policy to decrease Add an article
the government
plastic
usage, so that people
forced
to do so. Add a missing verb
are forced
for example
here in Indonesia, government
prohibited groceries store to prepare Add an article
the government
plastic
bag
so that Fix the agreement mistake
bags
people
always bring their own bags. And it is quite successful to reduce plastics
.
To sum up
, reduce
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reducing
plastics
usage should Change the noun form
plastic
started
Change the verb form
start
be started
from
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with
small
Correct article usage
a small
act
as an individual. Meanwhile, Fix the agreement mistake
acts
government
could prevent from Add an article
the government
policy
that Add an article
the policy
a policy
encourage
Change the verb form
encourages
people
to care more about the environment.Submitted by emailduringexcersice on
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