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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004
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The table compares the number of
barrels
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 of
oil
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 produced in a single
day
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 in four African countries, namely
Nigeria
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, Chad,
Congo
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, and Somalia between 2000 and 2004. As can be seen, all countries witnessed an upward trend in their daily
oil
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 output, except for
Congo
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. Noticeably, despite seeing the most rapid growth rate over 5 years, Chad remained one of the two smallest producers.
To begin
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 with, there was a switch in ranks between
Nigeria
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 and
Congo
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 whose daily
oil
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 volume far outnumbered the other
countries’
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countries
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. In 2000,
Congo
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 led in production, at 275,000
barrels
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whereas
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Nigeria
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 only made 205,000
barrels
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 per
day
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.
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, in 2004,
Nigeria
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 overtook
Congo
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 to rank first with 213,000
barrels
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 being produced in a single
day
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, 10,000
barrels
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 more than the figure for
Congo
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.
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, the daily
oil
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 production in the other two countries was insignificant. Specifically, 5000
barrels
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 was the figure for Somalia in 2000, which
then
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 saw a steady rise until 2004 when it grew more than two-fold to reach 50,000
barrels
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 per
day
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. As for Chad, not until 2003 did
this
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 country record its very first 8000
barrels
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 of crude
oil
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 produced on a daily basis and
this
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 amount surged to finish at an equal level of production to Somalia’s in the
last
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 year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words barrels, oil, day, nigeria, congo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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