Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 150 words.
As a member of
the
society, we have equal rights, Correct article usage
apply
independence
to do and choose to earn Correct word choice
and independence
money
, but the
wealth is not equally going in Correct article usage
apply
this
capitalized world. Rich people
have more alternatives than poor people
as they have enough wealth to spend on anything. So, millionaires have more opportunities to give a
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apply
support
who needs their help. I suppose that becoming a wealthy person is a
best way to Change the article
the
support
others
.
Firstly
, businessmen can help for
charity services by dividing a part of their profit and it will increase the reputation of the company Change preposition
with
also
. Moreover
, we can feel the
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self satisfaction
by engaging Add a hyphen
self-satisfaction
actively
to improve the quality of someone’s life. Replace the word
activities
For instance
, Rich people
can give gifts and financial support
for
child Change preposition
to
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in orphanage
orphanage
and they can feel happy by watching how children enjoy Fix the agreement mistake
orphanages
with
gifts and their feedback which can’t buy Change preposition
apply
us
. Most Correct pronoun usage
them
of
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apply
religious
leaders Add an article
the religious
also
try to promote the positive effects of giving something for
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to
others
among the
prosperous men.
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However
, if we haven’t money
, we have opportunities to help people
who need our courage. For example
, education expert
have Fix the agreement mistake
experts
knowledge
and they can give it to the students who Add an article
the knowledge
haven’t
enough facilities and live in remote areas by using correspondence education, though they haven’t time and Add a missing verb
do haven’t
money
to travel such
a long distance. Furthermore
, money
is not the only way to support
people
who suffer from poverty or illness. According to
the Lord Buddha, the only wealth that we can earn merits by
helping Change preposition
apply
others
. We can offer our blood , though
we are poor or rich and it doesn’t need Correct word choice
whether
money
.
To sum up
, I can conclude that currency is not the only way that we can help others
and, eventually, I believe that, if we think widely we have more options for giving support
for
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to
people
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