Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are different approaches and mindsets
vary
when a problem occurs in a Correct pronoun usage
that vary
person
’s life Use synonyms
among
society. Change preposition
in
While
I understand Linking Words
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reasons
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the reasons
of
accepting things as it was, I completely support the idea of being solution-oriented is the only way Change preposition
for
of
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to
survive
against problems in our lives.
On the Change the verb form
surviving
one
hand, It is extremely normal that people may hardly find Use synonyms
motivation
or self-confidence Correct article usage
the motivation
on
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in
itselves
to fight bad situations and problems Correct your spelling
itself
due to
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the
several Correct article usage
apply
reasons
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, their mindset and the belonging Linking Words
society
become them Change preposition
to society
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,cycnical
cycnical
Correct your spelling
cynical
person
. Use synonyms
For example
, if a Linking Words
person
would grow up in Use synonyms
old-fashioned
and religious community, that Add an article
the old-fashioned
an old-fashioned
person
could Use synonyms
propably
have a tendency to believe that bad things are being solved by extraordinary powers and Correct your spelling
probably
only
thing is to Add an article
the only
do
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apply
This
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mystisism
idea could the Correct your spelling
mysticism
one
more passive Use synonyms
person
in Use synonyms
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, Linking Words
media
and black news are indeed Use synonyms
one
of the most important Use synonyms
reasons
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of
developing Change preposition
for
this
kind of problematic mindset. Nowadays television and social Linking Words
media
are full of highlighted news in order to attract more people. Use synonyms
This
method Linking Words
impose
hopeless energy Change the verb form
imposes
to
the watchers, Change preposition
on
then
it Linking Words
is resulted
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results
has resulted
with
depressive personalities. Change preposition
in
Finally
, family structure and conditions Linking Words
also
can not be Linking Words
underestimaded
. It is likely that if a Correct your spelling
underestimated
person
grew up in a poor family, in the future it can be seen lack of self-confidence personalities.
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On the other hand
, even though conditions and Linking Words
reasons
may seem very high, in my Use synonyms
opinion
there is always Add the comma(s)
,opinion
a
hope in Remove the article
apply
the
life. Correct article usage
apply
This
life is given us Linking Words
with
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apply
a
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apply
one
chance and Use synonyms
one
opportunity. In order to improve problematic mentality, there are several measures Use synonyms
can
be taken in the personal Correct pronoun usage
that can
lifes
. Beginning Correct your spelling
lives
with
focusing on inspirational stories and admirable personalities could be Change preposition
apply
one
of the solutions of it. In Use synonyms
this
case, the biggest onus is on us and on the Linking Words
media
. With the help of professional mental support and social Use synonyms
media
detox, the Use synonyms
person
itself can handle to overcome Use synonyms
this
hopeless mentality. Linking Words
In addition
to personal Linking Words
achievments
, Correct your spelling
achievements
achievement
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media
Correct article usage
the media
also
should take into consideration of Linking Words
this
collective problem Linking Words
with
focusing much more inspirational stories Change preposition
by
on
the news Change preposition
in
an
their newspapers.
In conclusion, I have both discussed the cynical mentality and bold fighting mindset of a Correct your spelling
and
person
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with
regarding background Change preposition
apply
reasons
and possible solutions. I am completely on the side of we should find Use synonyms
reasons
to fight difficulties and have a positive approach to Use synonyms
handle
of problems.Change the form of the verb
handling
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