Some children find some subjects such as Maths and philosophy too difficult to learn, so some people argue that these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree? agree = concentrate in interesting, creative disagree = general knowledge, find interesting
An argument has arisen between two views, the first one believes that complex
subjects
should be optional, Use synonyms
while
the second view says that they should remain required. In Linking Words
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report, I will go through both views and Linking Words
then
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to conclude
my point of view.
Learning various Linking Words
subjects
is interesting, beneficial, and profitable; Use synonyms
as a consequence
, schools teach them as main courses. Linking Words
To begin
with, it is important to have general knowledge about a variety of topics. For Linking Words
further
explanation, many companies admit that it is essential to know basic information in different fields, and they look for candidates who have Linking Words
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In addition
, some learners can not study at a university, so studying a variety of Linking Words
subjects
during their childhood helps them to find suitable jobs. Use synonyms
Besides
that, they might find these topics interesting after digging into them. Many people share on social media that after studying some difficult Linking Words
subjects
, they understood them; Use synonyms
as a result
, they Linking Words
become
interested in them.
Even though the points mentioned above are influencing, there are reverse points that hold equal influence. Wrong verb form
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Firstly
, avoiding Linking Words
such
classes will help students concentrate on their favourite Linking Words
subjects
. Use synonyms
For example
, In KSA, the educational system has ,dramatically, been changed, so that students can focus on their favourite fields; Linking Words
therefore
, a lot of students created great innovations. Linking Words
Secondly
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this
will help them to dig into suitable topics Linking Words
instead
of consuming their time in boring classes. Linking Words
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Whereas
, many learners acknowledge that they feel bored Correct word choice
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to go
to school because of the hard Change the verb form
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subjects
, so deleting them is an ideal solution.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
learning some Linking Words
subjects
is time-consuming, difficult, and useless, it is, actually, helpful, exciting, and strategic. Use synonyms
However
, I completely disagree with the statement mentioned above.Linking Words
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Task Achievement
It's beneficial to enhance the clarity of your arguments by providing more specific examples or data to support your points, especially when discussing the benefits or drawbacks of making complex subjects optional.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structures and use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. This can improve the overall readability and flow of your essay.
Task Achievement
Consider refining your conclusion to more directly address the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement, ensuring your stance is thoroughly backed by the arguments presented in the body paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Well-structured essay that effectively introduces and concludes with a clear stance on the topic.
Task Achievement
Good use of examples to support points, although more specific examples could further strengthen the argument.
Task Achievement
Successful in addressing both sides of the argument, fulfilling the task requirement.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example