some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Nowadays, many kids are addicted to spending time on mobile

phones

. I believe the lack of censorship on the content provided on

phones

is the major cause of

this

trend and in my opinion,

this

is a negative phenomenon. Products and services provided on smartphones often contain unhealthy or intriguing elements.

For instance

, pornography and toxic games. When there is no sufficient restriction on their availability to pupils.

Subsequently

, young people who have little experience or determination to deter these tempts can easily develop addiction towards them.

Hence

they end up spending hours every day consuming

this

information on mobile

phones

. For me,

this

phenomenon is negative, because it could cause health problems for children,

as well as

create intense relationships between family members. On the kids' side, their skeletons have not become strong enough,

therefore

if they hold the

phones

for hours without adjusting the poses, their shoulders and spines would suffer great pressure, resulting in disease concerning bones. As far as family is concerned

,

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when little girls and boys are absorbed in playing applications on their smartphones, they would pay little attention to their parents and neglect to appreciate or value the things father and mother do for them,

such

as cooking for them, taking them to and from school.

As a result

, parents would feel unrelated to and grow dissatisfied towards the kids, leading to misunderstanding and a gap between parents and children. In conclusion, I suggest that insufficient censorship of information provided on

phones

is to be blamed for

this

situation and

this

trend is absolutely a negative one.