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Dear John, It is great to hear from you and I am surprised to hear that you already read about the news that China is opening the border to foreign guests starting in January. It is amazing how fast news travels these days. It has been 3 years since the first covid case discovery in December 2020. The government decided to close off the border to prevent new cases from overseas. It protected millions of older people's life,

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, affected the economy badly. The new string of virus Omicron is weaker and causes fewer fatal diseases, the government decided it is time to fight against the virus and open the border and resume global economic activities.

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will definitely have positive impacts on society, for one, businesses will resume their international expansion and cooperation; for the other, we can

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start travelling again. In fact, I am already planning a trip to Australia

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year. If you are considering travelling to China,

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year would be good timing and I would be happy to take you around the Shanghai region. Sincerely, Katherine

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

182 words

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details •say about your salary package

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?