The charts show what Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts the next step of graduates in Australian secondary schools which are categorized into three groups. The report surveyed between 1980 and 2000.
In general, there was a shifting preference in choosing to work than study for a bachelor's degree,
whereas
people who were unemployed remained fairly unchanged.
According to
the data, the percentage of people who were extremely keen to improve their knowledge for further
education was 50% in 1980, and then
began to worsen to 38% in the following year, and had a declining percentage in the last
year. In contrast
, people who were eager to work indicated an upward tendency, from 40% in 1980 to 50% in 1990, and continued to rise dramatically until 55% in 2000.
On the other hand
, the proportion of unemployed was 10%, and this
was the lowest number in 1980. This
number shot up moderately to 12% in the next year. Surprisingly, this
trend did not last
long,
and began to plunge down to 8% in 2000.Remove the comma
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