People have different ways of escaping stress and difficult of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the reasons for stress? What are the best ways of reducing stress?
In
this
perpetually transforming epoch. Mental stress
has been increasing among people
around the world. However
, few individuals
have a different ways
to overcome their Correct the article-noun agreement
different ways
a different way
stress
and the burden of modern well-being. Few read, some does exercise and other
prefer to do work in their gardens. I have discussed the reasons and Correct pronoun usage
others
way
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ways
stress
in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the side of reasons for this
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on
health
. In addition
, Nowadays,mankind only want
to earn Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
money
bunch of money
and due to
this
, they do hard work without any Focus on health
because of this
, many people
suffer from less sleep and mental stress
. For example
, according to
the World Health
Organization, most of
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stress
and low thinking power due to
a high workload. Furthermore
, individuals
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want
money
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, they do not concentrate in
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Now, taking into account of measure side of this
trend, firstly
, the government
should concentrate more in
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on
people
's health
rather than politics. In other words
, if government
establish some gardens in big cities which have every type of exercise equipment. So, many men and women can use it and able
to keep themself fit. Add a missing verb
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parks
by
Indian authorities, the ratio of Change preposition
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people
's I'll health
has decreased by 50 percentage
. Replace the word
per cent
Therefore
, many individuals
can be fit with aid from the government
.
In conclusion, due to
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people
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