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People have different ways of escaping stress and difficult of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the reasons for stress? What are the best ways of reducing stress?

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In
this
 perpetually transforming epoch. Mental
stress
 has been increasing among
people
 around the world.
However
, few
individuals
 have
a different ways
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different ways
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 to overcome their
stress
 and the burden of modern well-being. Few read, some does exercise and
other
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others
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 prefer to do work in their gardens. I have discussed the reasons and
way
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ways
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 to reduce
stress
 in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the side of reasons for
this
 phenomenon, the first and foremost is masses concentrate more
in
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on
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 their work rather than
health
.
In addition
, Nowadays,mankind only
want
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wants
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 to earn
money
 bunch of
money
 and
due to
this
, they do hard work without any Focus on
health
 because of
this
, many
people
 suffer from less sleep and mental
stress
.
For example
,
according to
 the World
Health
 Organization, most
of
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people
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the people
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 are suffering from high
stress
 and low thinking power
due to
 a high workload.
Furthermore
,
individuals
 are not
wants
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want
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 to so exercise and only want to earn
money
 and
due to
this
, they do not concentrate
in
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on
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 their
health
 and eat fast food since to Hectique life. So, they gain
obesity
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obese
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 and suffer from many diseases.
Such
 as.diabetes, high super level and low strength bone. Now, taking into account of measure side of
this
 trend,
firstly
, the
government
 should concentrate more
in
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on
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people
's
health
 rather than politics.
In other words
, if
government
 establish some gardens in big cities which have every type of exercise equipment. So, many men and women can use it and
able
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are able
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 to keep themself fit.
For instance
,
due to
 putting equipment in
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the park
a park
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park
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parks
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by
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Indian authorities, the ratio of
people
's I'll
health
 has decreased by 50
percentage
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per cent
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.
Therefore
, many
individuals
 can be fit with aid from the
government
. In conclusion,
due to
greediness
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the greediness
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 of
people
 earning ,
money
 will their
health
. on the other
hands
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hand
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,
government
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the government
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 should add
individuals
 to keep their bodies feet.
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