Some people think that Information technologies have more disadvantages than advatages. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays
power
engineering is a very important industry for each county. The goal of the project I am currently working on is to find out sources of energy in Zetland. So,I have found and analyzed some relevant data presented in the table.
According to
the data, there is a variety of
power
sources in Zetland.
For instance
, natural gas is at the top of the table
as well as
petroleum. Apparently, they are the main fossil fuels in the modern world.
In addition
, coal
power
stations and nuclear
power
stations are taken together produce less energy than natural gas. In conclusion, I strongly believe that despite all problems energy generation is very important for Zetland. I think people can use
power
stations in order to save the environment
as well as
develop modern technologies.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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