You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear Joy, Thank you for being

such

a fantastic host and wonderful friend. I apologize for not writing sooner, I had some work to complete after returning home. I truly enjoyed my stay at your stunning new farmhouse. The view from the dining hall is breathtaking and I felt so relaxed and comfortable. Swimming in the rooftop infinity pool was a highlight for me. Your garden was simply amazing, the landscaping and plants creating a heavenly atmosphere. I shared with Ann about your farmhouse and she's eagerly looking forward to visiting in March. I will

also

be joining her

then

, and as you mentioned, we will celebrate your birthday together. I can't wait to see you again. With love, Jennifer

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

120 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources( such as internet and television). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The society need to honor and respect women to make progress. Do you agree of disagree