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reading and writing from adolescents.
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in view of providing the materials, Use synonyms
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as electronic novels, blogs and SNS platforms, which are helpful for gaining the Linking Words
abilities
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web sites
or SNS, like Facebook and Instagram. Youth can be exposed to Correct your spelling
websites
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widespread of these devices. It would enhance and stimulate younger’s writing and reading skills.
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addictions to these materials. An increasing number of adolescents are spending their time Change noun form
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surfing the internet, particularly unproductive activities, Change preposition
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such
as watching videos and pictures, and playing games without writing or reading activities. It means that these phones and laptops might Linking Words
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, teenagers’ cognitive abilities, including Linking Words
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the
counterparts of a decade ago.
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to
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