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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Today, technology is developing more and more. It is applied in industries to increase work productivity. Education is no
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exception
 in many schools now, there are always
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computers
 for
students
 to use. Some people say
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 a positive trend but others people disagree but in my opinion, I think both sides are right.
Computers
 have many advantages in education.
Firstly
,
computers
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student
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students
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 improve more knowledge. They can search the information about their lessons
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 class.
Secondly
, teachers can more easily in teaching. They can give
students
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 needed to teach.
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 can give assignments faster and more compactly.
Computers
also
 help teachers prepare lessons to teach better. Contrary to the very good benefits of
computers
, the harms are
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 very worrying.
Firstly
, many
students
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computers
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 bad
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. They use
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 to play games at school so they won’t focus
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 the lessons.
Secondly
,
students
 will gradually lose community skills. In break time, they just focus
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 the computer to play games and don’t go out to play and communicate with their friends.
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,
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computer
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 to play games
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bad scores at school,
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 of
brain
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, they don’t do homework
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 their own effort, but just search
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 answers on the internet. In conclusion,
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although
computers
 might have many
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 your health.
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 the advantages of using
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computers in
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 education outweigh the disadvantages.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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